Lovemaking begins

Delicious desire melts into sugar-coated kisses

As my lips ingest your skin

Tantalizing your every fantasy

Intensifying your burning flame

Delighting in your raucous pleasure.

Hands behind your back now,

I unzip your dress and slide it down.

You watch my eyes and smile

As your hand reaches to me

Warming the swell on me that grows.

My strong hands cover your thighs

Removing what is in the way

Sliding it to your ankles.

My tongue rises back over your skin,

Enjoying its path back up to your lips.

Finally taking it no longer

I crush my lips hard to your panting mouth

Embracing and wrenching you close.

Our bodies primed for primal release

As your legs wrap around my waist

And lovemaking begins.

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  1. Jar dropping hot stuff Gentleman Dave!

    I am just wondering how the hell I am going to be able to concentrate on work today with this vision in my mind!

    “Hands behind your back” – like that detail so much.
    “Crush my lips hard to your panting mouth” – speechless!
    ….and I have to say when I read the line “as your legs wrap around my waist”, my mind started to imagine one very athletic love making session and I do wish I could describe that scene with the soul you put into your verse!

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    1. Lady A says:

      Jar dropping? Or jaw dropping Jenna?

      This is a very exciting piece and the painting is charming.

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      1. Oooops – yes it was supposed to be jaw dropping Noo, But I suppose dropping jaws is kinda dramatic too.

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      2. Thank you, Lady A! ‘Jar dropping’ works just as well. In my mind, she is holding a glass jar and as soon as the seductive magic of the poem strikes her, she drops it to the floor, smashing it and sending hundreds of jelly beans across the kitchen floor as she gasps in pleasure and leans against the counter for support, still reading the poem… still reading… But I have an overactive imagination. 😉

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      3. Lady A says:

        Knowing their fridge, it would probably be a jar of chilli relish.

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    2. Jenna…🥰🥰 did I plant an erotic vision in your mind for you to dwell on all day? That is always a more secondary motivation for my erotic writing. I truly hope it worked. ❤

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      1. If I am late with submitting reports for my boss, I wonder what she would think if I blamed Gentleman Dave painting erotic visions for me and distracting me so that I cannot sit still at my desk ❤

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  2. Hot, sensual, beautiful. It sure put an image in my mind, and allowed me to fantasize what happened next. Love the art work too!
    Thank you for linking to Wicked Wednesday, and I hope to see you back with more in the future 🙂
    ~ Marie

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    1. Thank you so much, Marie! I am honored to participate. ☺☺

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  3. Kritika says:

    A great descriptive erotic scene. Would say its amazing.

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    1. Thank you so much, Kritika!! It is wonderful to hear from you and I hope you are doing well. 😊😊

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      1. Kritika says:

        Welcome kindly 🙂
        I am doing great. Thank you 🙂 Hope you are awesome.

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      2. I am now, Kritika, after reading your comments. I hope you are awesome, too! 😊

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